This is not the End
All alone,
here I am
On that
little square you used to take me into town
But the
magic is not here anymore
Not since
you faded away
Now I’m walking trough the busy street
Where the
avenue and the train station meet
I see
smiles on people’s faces
But I can’t
even try to fake one
Searching
in my mind for the memories we’ve got together
Your
whisper came to me as if you were still here
“Don’t look back, live your life, there’s no
time for the past,
But this is
not the end; we’ll find each other someday”.
It got into
my soul, it got into my heart
My eyes
shone as bright as the sun
The battle
of my thoughts ended,
Sadness
vanished.
I understood now, or story we’ll never be finished.
You´ve written an amazing narrative poem, young lady.
ResponderBorrarYour use of vocabulary, imagery and grammar structures is awesome.
Congratulations on your creative writing skills!!
This to me is a perfect
10 (ten)
PS: Just a comment about your last line, the correct form would be "our story will be never finished".